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My Dream and My Comminity
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My dream is to dig 6,146,572,837 yards through earth from the ground to underground. I want to learn about how the new species that I find underground move, talk to each other, what they eat, and when they come up on the ground, morning or night. I will send these photos I take to scientists all over the world and tell them what I learn about them. Then the scientists will teach children what they learn about these new animals. The children will be interested to know that the new species can eat the garbage people throw away. When they are doing that they are helping the earth stay healthy. Then the children will know how to care for them. I wish my dream will come true and there will be a green and clean earth of ours.
My Dreams
My dream is to become a vet, a scientist and an artist. I want to help animals get better when they are sick or hurt. I want to be an artist that helps humans and animals connect better. I also want to be a scientist who discovers cool new awesome facts about animals. I love animals!
My dreams are important to me, the animals, and my community. As a vet, I can help pets that need help. When a pet is sick, I will give them some medicine to treat them. When they are hurt, I will treat their wound. If the owner is worried, I will comfort them. I will help all pets and their owners in need.
My dream as an animal scientist will help humans learn to respect animals. For example, to teach them not to fish too much. If many people fish too much, there could be no fish left. It’s important to understand the animal’s behavior. Then we can be nice to animals, and they will be nice to us.
Being an artist helps because I can draw cute fun pictures that people will look at and start to feel for the animal. If I draw very well, they might even love them. I would draw cats, dogs, and even lions and tigers! Then people will understand the animals. Drawing is a good thing, but drawing for animals is good, too. I will be able to help both humans and animals.
While many people love animals, many others in the world also don’t care about animals. It is important for people to understand and respect animals. I consider it my mission to help the world love animals. In my opinion, everyone should be nice to animals. I think helping animals will eventually help us!
My Dream
My dream is to become a builder. So everybody can live in a house. If you need a house you need a builder like me.
When I become a builder, I will help my friend who needs a new house to build a house for them. I will be the designer, I will design the house and have a construction crew to build the house.
What are your dreams? My dream is to become a builder.
My Dream
My dream is to become a police officer. I want to become a police officer so there will be no more bad guys, and everyone will have a good life.
These reasons are why I want to be a police officer. If someone is in danger, like if a bank robber wants to rob a bank, I will use my gun to let him freeze, and take him to my police car, and take him to jail. It is important to my community so they can have a good life. It is important to the world because I can save people.
Would you like to be a police officer? What would you like to be? If I’m a police officer, life will be easy, and it’s all because of me.
My Dream
My dream is to keep the world in peace. It is important to me, my community and the world. Now, let me tell you why it is important.
It is important to me because I don’t want the whole family to fight. When daddy and mommy were in a fight, I feel sad. When me and Charlotte were in a fight, I feel mad at Charlotte. I want that to change because I love my family! To keep peace in the family, we can use breath rules to control our emotions!
It is important to my community because it would be loud and noisy without peace. Everyone in the community needs to be thankful for what they have, and try not to yell! We need to be helpful and caring too.
It is important to the world because the world would go into war without peace. I really don’t want that to happen, because lots of people would die and lose their families. When two countries disagree, they should negotiate instead of a war. They can test their own thoughts out and see which one is better and do that.
That is why my dream is important to me, my community and the world. I think my dream can be achieved if we work together.