Adding more to “A Place I visited”

Be more descriptive! Here’s how:

1. Please have your parents copy & paste your “A Place I visited” into Microsoft Word, use 16 point font, have it double or 2.5 spaced, and print it out.
2. Find at least three sentences that you would like to add more.
3. Add more descriptive words to these sentences. You can add a word (an adjective), a phrase (a few describing words), or even a sentence to describe the color, sound, feel, taste, or smell. For example, I smell the sea –> I smell the salty sea.

After you are done. Have your parents take a photo of your work and submit as a comment to this post. By the setting of this software, you have to type something into the comment box to be able to submit (not just the picture); you could just type in “Here’s my revision.”

If your photo is too large, please either have your parents shrink the size (open with meitu/美图 and save a copy, the size of the copy is much smaller), or email me the picture so that I could shrink and post for you.