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In the City
I see a lot of colorful fresh fruits. I see big cars. I hear cars moving, people talking. I smell gasoline, and fruit. I feel bumpy and smooth apples. Last, I taste sour and sweet fruits.
The city is definitely a good place to feel with all five senses! Do you like to go to the city? 🙂
In New York City, I went to a market. Outside the market, I saw red and green melons 🍉 and red apples 🍎 . When the people were talking about the fruits, I tasted the melons and apples. They were juicy and yummy. The fruits felt smooth. I could also smell the gas from the cars. Have you been there?
It’s so cool that you have been to NYC! I was there for a year and loved how there’s so much for all my five senses to feel.
In the Big City
In the big city, there are lots of things to hear, smell, see, touch, and taste! I hear loud noises made by the passing cars and trucks. Next, I smell the delicious smells of food. Yum! I see lots of people going to different places, for example, the playground, the shops and the stores. Also, I feel things like a doorknob to get in places and buildings. Last of all, I taste the most delicious fruits you could ever think of! There are lots of things to smell, hear, tastes, feel, and see! I like the big city. Maybe one day you can get to the big city and touch, taste, smell, and hear, too!
Very cool! I can see that you enjoy being in the city so much! I do, too!
If I were in a city, these should be my senses: In the city, I can see colorful things and I can hear people talking. In the city, I can smell yummy food and I can feel the bumpy sides of a brick on the wall. I could taste the yummy food if I went to a restaurant. These are the senses I should have.
Sounds fun! Do you like to be in the city?
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Emma, the picture may have been too big, so it wasn’t able to get uploaded. It’s OK.
In the city you can have fun. In the city it is noisy very noisy. people are everywhere in the city they is food. they are kids you can see shops. In the city they are mayor’s
It does seem very fun!
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Thank you so much Mrs. Ally!
You’re welcome! 🙂
You’ve discovered a lot of cool things for your five senses! I’m sure you’ll be able to write a long paragraph 🙂
In the City, I see a people is driving a car. I see the people is walking. I taste the apple is sweet. I hear a bird is singing. I smell lemon a little sour. I feel the city is busy.
You got it 🙂
You’ve described quite a few fun things in the city! Do you like to be in the city?
In the city of Indianapolis I see truck delivering mea. I hear cars beeping. I smell fresh air. I feel hard apples. I taste juicy watermelon. It is yummy!
I love Indinapolis, too! 🙂
In the City
I like to go to Carmel Downtown. In Carmel Downtown I see cars. I hear people talking. I smell good food. I tasted some apples. I feel happy when I go to Carmel downtown.
Sounds so fun! I love Carmel Downtown, too. It’s a very stylish little town.
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Sounds fun! Carmel is my favorite town 🙂
In the city
We like to go to Carmel downtown. I see a lot of people. I hear cars driving by. I smell nice food. I taste apples. I feel happy. I love Carmel downtown. The end.
I love Carmel downtown, too! There’s a lot to do 🙂